Proposal Essay

Overall: 83/100 B- // Cover letter 20/20 A
Grammar and Spelling: 20/25 Passive voice throughout.
Organization: 25/25 This is fine.
Content: 15/25 You need to spend more time on the proposal, making a specific suggestion and explaining how it is realistic and will be helpful. Too much of your argument is spent in   establishing the causal chain leading up to global warming and not enough of it concentrates on the proposal element.
MLA Format:   23/25 You’re getting closer here. Specific comments in works cited.

I recycled one of my topics, but I thought it would be a good choice for this type of essay. I feel that everyone should be conscious of what they are doing and how it affects the environment and all of the beings that live in it.   As long as you build on the work, I think that’s fine. It is a good idea to ask first, though, as in some classes, the instructor will want you to do unique research for every topic.

I think I included the aspects and used the proper format for the essay.   I looked at your list of aspects that should be included with this essay.   Then again, it is always easier to know exactly what you meant when you wrote what someone else is reading. Oh indeed.

Any feedback or revisions that should be done are welcome.    
Could Slowing the Effects of Global Warming Save Our World?
Global warming has been a recurring issue in the news lately, but not everyone realizes how great the impact is on the Earth. One space between sentences The whole world"s climate is changing.   Climate change occurs naturally, but now people are not only causing it, they’re speeding it up. Scientists believe that our use of fossil fuels causes global warming (Musgrave).   If the 6.6 billion people on the earth change a few daily habits, we may be able to slow the effects of global warming and ensure that the life of our fossil fuels is extended.
As the temperature of the atmosphere rises gradually, it wreaks havoc on the glaciers, rainforests and...